Our final cut can be viewed below:
or by clicking >HERE<
Based in the improvemnts from our rough cut (listed below) we re-edited the music video
Improvements:1-"It could do with having a faster pace to it so maybe cut to the beat".
2-"Maybe include more location shots of the abandoned building as it is a nice cinematic location".
3-"Didn't feel as if there was much of a narrative behind the main character".
4-"The performance was good in places but he covers his mouth with the mic quite often".
To improve our music video, we:
1- Cut to the beat more and had shorter clips to increase the pace of the video
2-Filmed more shots at the fort location as it was desired by our audience. This added more cinematic shots to the video which was one of our positive feedbacks from our focus group
3- We attempted to reorganise and add some more clips of our main character James to bring more of a narrative to the video.
4- refilmed the performance and used some of these clips in the music video, in these clips, the singer is more active and doesn't hold the mic up to his mouth all of the time.
