With our music video coming together we gave a viewing of our rough cut to a focus group to gain their feedback on where they feel the music video can be improved.
Our Rough Cut:
> Rough Cut <
Our focus group was of 5 school pupils with ages from 17-18.
Some Feedback we received was that:
Improvements:
-"It could do with having a faster pace to it so maybe cut to the beat".
-"Maybe include more location shots of the abandoned building as it is a nice cinematic location".
-"Didn't feel as if there was much of a narrative behind the main character".
-"The performance was good in places but he covers his mouth with the mic quite often".
Positive Feedback:
-"Nice Cinematic shots"
-"Good choice of locations"
-"Effective transitions"
-"Good use of Music Video Conventions".
